random rhymes

ok so this is what happened today.
i was sitting in church and the pastor asked anyone who had something to praise god for to stand and testify. well i though to myself...wow shouldnt every person be standing right now. and as a few people timidly stood and spoke their minds, i stayed in my seat. not because i have nothing to praise god for, its actually the opposite of that, but because i was to shy to stand and say what i was really thinking. and just when i had mustered up the courage to stand, the pastor moved on. darn! foiled. but then i thought... why the heck was i even scared? i should be standing on my chair shouting out at the top of my lungs all the things im grateful for that i cant even begin to understand.
so in my mind i started writing a little song. i couldnt really think because we were starting to sing other songs, so i didnt really edit it at all. its just a few little random rhymes. but anyways,here goes.......
"i will lay it all on the line!
i will stand at the alter and scream!
for i am yours and you are mine.
this is the song for the redeemed.
i will yell from the highest mountain top
i will show it for all to see
your love and grace wont ever stop
this is the song for the free"
soooo what do ya think? im gonna work on it some more. cya later :)
audrey hiebel <3